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高考资源网（ ），您身边的高考专家 欢迎广大教师踊跃来稿，稿酬丰厚。 高考资源网（ ），您身边的高考专家 欢迎广大教师踊跃来稿，稿酬丰厚。 题型三 名校模拟 题组一 Correction1(2018届福建省百所重点校高三联合考试 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had. 【答案】 As my mother and father were always busy working,??I was often at home by myself. I felt??all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day,??my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty??worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked??if he was the happiest man in the world.??at him, I realized how??I really was. I??enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about?. I realized??grateful I was to my parents for all that I had. 【解析】 第一处：前面一句是原因状语从句，有连词as，所以不再需要连词。故去掉so。 第二处：此处指人内心“感到无聊”，用-ed结尾的形容词。故boring改为bored。 第七处：句意：看到他，我是多么的幸运啊！系动词was后面跟形容词作表语。故luckily改为lucky。 第八处：根据前后文可知，文章用一般过去时态。故have改为had。 第九处：此处指“父母关心我”，用宾格作宾语。故him改为me。 第十处：此处指“我感激父母我所做的一切”。副词how修饰形容词，形容词grateful作系动词was的表语。故what改为how。 Correction2(2018届山东省师大附中高三模拟考试 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Dear Mr. Wang, Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in our school.