;题目;;;评分原则;possible version 分析; ①总说活动、概括意义:Last weekend, Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace, which proved to be very interesting and rewarding.
②活动开始、图1要点+细节:We arrived at the entrance early in the morning and I introduced the history of the park to Tom briefly. ③图1细节、过渡:The moment we entered the park, Tom was attracted by the beautiful scenery and we walked along the beautiful lake happily. ④图2要点、细节: Soon, we noticed an elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, with a bucket of water aside. ⑤图2细节: Holding a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the
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