北京高考英语应用文备考.pptVIP

假设你是高三（1）英语课代表李华，你们的口语老师Chris已经完成教学任务，准备回英国。请你根据以下内容要点给Chris写一封信, 并附上她与全班同学的合影，代表全班同学对他表示感谢。 要点： 1. Chris风趣幽默； 2. Chris授课方式独特，组织各种活动； 3. 希望他能再来中国。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。 * Problems: 1.主谓语不搭配，时态混乱。 2.要点表达不清楚。 3.单词拼写问题 4.逻辑问题 * Dear Chris, We’re sorry that you are to go back to England after one-year teaching in our school. We all think you leave us a deep impression during this year of teaching and getting along with you. 写作要点：回国--go back to UK… 此信是写给马上要离开中国回英国的Chris，不必寒暄过多。有学生不会写Britain, UK,就用London或者British来替代，是错误的。 此段的时态是现在时。 代表学生写信： I am writing to express thanks to you on behalf of other classmates. * You are a person of a great sense of humor in our eyes. Because of your unique personality, your classes are always filled with laughter. In order to help us remember some useful expressions, you always make up funny stories of yours, which up to now we have still kept in mind. 写作要点： 描述教师的几个要点要用过去时。 单词拼写错误：humour是名词，形容词为humorous .funny不是用来形容人的，特别是女士。 感谢：Thanks to…, we are grateful for… with the appreciation to your patience and courage… * Besides, you have your own way of teaching, which is totally different from other teachers’. In your class, what impressed us most is the various activities you created. It is these lively and interesting activities that motivated us a lot to learn more from you. I still remember once you let us play a game in which we were supposed to continue the rest part of the story the previous student made. We really had fun that day. 写作要点：适当拓展细节 特别的方法—unique teaching methods 词汇搭配问题多：举例不当，教学目的表述不清。 * All in all, we do benefit a lot from you, not only how to improve our oral English, but also the way we are living our life. We all hope that you can come to China again and at that time we can share more experiences with each other. 写作要点： 教学有哪些成绩？点出来。 提高英语的程度：our English has been improved….we have got our English improved… * I will enclose a photo of you and us in t