专题06 书面表达（第05期）-2019届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编 Word版含解析.docVIP

【河北省保定市2019届高三10月摸底】假定你是李华，获悉你的一位南非朋友（1ucy）在约翰内斯堡大学孔子学院（Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University）举办的中文诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写封信表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。 注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Lucy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Lucy， I’m very glad to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese Poetry Competition held in Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University. Congratulations to you! It came as no surprise to me because I know you are a real Chinese culture lover, especially for Chinese poetry, and you’ve been studying in Confucius Institute for years. I’m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country. Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University（约翰内斯堡大学孔子学院），Chinese Poetry Competition（中文诗词朗诵比赛），Congratulations（祝贺），first prize（第一名），effort（努力），further study（深造），pay off (见成效)，progress(进步)及understanding（理解）等。 本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有Congratulations to（祝贺），no surprise（毫不意外），pay off (见成效)，have a good understanding of（对……有很好的理解）以及in the study of（在……的学习中），而且还使用了宾语从句“I’m very glad to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese Poetry Competition held in Confucius Institute at Johannesburg University.”及“I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country.”，状语从句“It came as no surprise to me because I know you are a real Chinese culture lover, e