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上海中考作文真题+预测白金版典藏 2010上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself 上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself 1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文： I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me: “Impossible is nothing, ” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself,though I didn’t get the good mark, I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself? and I was so proud of myself! 2009年上海中考英语作文试题评析(以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写—篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 学生习作1I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?评析此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。 中考作文给力预测 假期利弊★范文2008年政府取消了五一黄金周（May golden week），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的自由论坛上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的 　　假期利弊 　　★ 范文 　　2008年政府取消了“五一”黄金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复7天的长假。同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由。 　　AdvantagesDisadvantages 　　have a good rest 　　spend more time …with … 　　…cause a lot of trouble… 　　be cro