英文编辑工作中的一些问题-中国实验动物学报.ppt

中文论文中的英文写作：一些较常见的问题 中国医学科学院 北京协和医学院 题目 题目—太繁 双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法 建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型的实验研究 Bilateral vagotomy and carotid arteries combined cutting method Establishment of rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia animal model experimental study 双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型 Establishment of a rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia by combined bilateral vagotomy and carotid artery cutting 题目—太大 儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作 Establishment of Childood Simple Obesity Animal Model 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity 题目—太笼统 不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats 题目—不能反映原意、用错单词 基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering 题目—滥用缩写 乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-κB信号通路的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-κB signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 读者看不懂 RIMMVECs是什么； “的研究”可以省去。 题目—滥用缩写 哺乳动物 ES 细胞与 EG 细胞研究进展 哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞与 胚胎生殖 细胞研究进展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells 题目 — 拼写错误 comparision of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pig comparison of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pig 题目 — 用错单词 适度深吸气呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射时基于不同参照物配准对银夹构成几何体分次内位移的影响 Influence of registration based on the different reference markets on the displacement of the geometry consisted of all clips in the cavity for external-beam partial breast irradiation at moderate deep inspiration breath holding 署名与单位 署名—大小写 Li bao-ming , wang zhida，liu xiaowen，yao tao,ouyang xiaotong,su jiagang Li Bao-ming , Wang Zhi-da，Liu Xiao-wen，Yao Tao, Ouyang Xiao-tong, Su Jia-gang 姓名大写、标点符号 单位错词、错名、大小写 The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University 单位—不全 Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences 单位—大小写 Department of …, The Fifth Central Hospital of Ti