四级作文评分标准及样卷1满分15分2分5等2分条理不清思路.docVIP

四级作文评分标准及样卷 1．满分15分 2．分5等 2分：条理不清，思路 四级作文评分标准及样卷 1(满分15分. 2(分5等 2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分:基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重的语言错误。 8分:基本切题。思想表达比较清楚，文字尚连贯;但语言错误较多，其中有一些是严重 错误。 11分:切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分:切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误或仅有个别小错。 注:如题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得计入所写字数。 样卷分析: Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3. 我认为。。。 1( Currently, campuses of many famous universities are becoming one of the popular tourist attractions. It is reported that more and more people enjoy their holidays by visiting famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University. This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning whether university campus should be open to tourists. They indicate that people’s opinions vary in a big way. Some people believe that it is a good thing to open university campuses to tourists while others argue that it is not. Personally speaking, I’m in favor of campus tourism. For one thing, tourists may derive lots of enjoyment from the beautiful scenes of famous universities. For another, the strong academic atmosphere may motivate tourists, particularly students, to work hard persevere with their dreams. Moreover, for famous universities, being open to tourists may serve as an effective approach to attract talents from all over the country. In short, campus tourism will not only benefit tourists but also develop the universities. 2. At present, a large number of people choose to visit famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University. As a result, famous universities campuses have become one of the tourist destinations. But should the university campus be open to tourists? As to this question, people have different opinions. Some people think that university campuses should be open to tourists since tourists can learn a lot of knowledge from them. Others think that they should not be open because universities are places for studying instea