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书面表达突破(一) ——图表类 图表类基础写作是以图表的形式呈现内容要点的,要点明确,范围具体。写作时要结合写作内容中的提示确定需要表达的内容要点,有时还要留意前面的文字说明部分。此类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,弄清信息点之间的关系,提炼出中心思想,然后进行分析、概括和归纳。写作时要注意：(1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述；善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率；过去特定的时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时；(2)切忌写成“填表题”,“一对一直译”,“句式单一”,遗漏“间接要点”,应巧妙组合信息。 原题再现 　　右图的饼状图(pie chart)显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。 写作模板 学生习作 　　A recent survey shows 图表的内容. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1,这一现象说明的问题．表中的内容2.表中内容3 and表中内容4. In my point of view,自己的观点．如何解决问题． A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. As is shown in the pie chart, 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. Surfing the Internet is the second popular activity among the students and about 36% of the students have interest in it. Only 8% of the students take reading as a hobby and even fewer,about 3%, are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music. 名师点评 　　本文虽没有使用较复杂的句子,但句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯,读来琅琅上口,主动语态、被动语态的灵活运用,使全文成为一个严密的整体,极好的完成了写作任务。 仿写训练 (2010·宁德第一次月考) 北京市政府发出限行通告,规定每辆私家车每周停驶一天(公休日除外)。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查的结果。请根据下列图表提示,描述被调查者的不同看法,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。 注意：1.文章的开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数； 2.词数120左右。 Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays.___________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays.A survey has been conducted about this issue on the Internet and the findings are as follows. Many people support the restriction.60% of them believe that it