大学英语四级-writing讲座.pptVIP

大学英语四级考试系列讲座 写作 WRITING 大学英语四级作文题评分原则 1．CET-4作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores) 。 2．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 评分标准 2分 —— 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且 多数为严重错误。 5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语 言错误。 8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯； 语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分 ——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言 错误。 14分 —— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好， 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 下面以2003.9试题为例 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured) 1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况 2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的 3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受 是…… Sample 1 Last Monday, when we were having sports class on the ground, one of my classmate, whose name is Xiao Yang, suddenly went faint. Her face looked so white that we all worried. Her roommates said that “she had heart disease.” “Oh, my God! Heart disease!” we did not know what to do. Our P.E. teacher suggested we send her to the hospital. But we wouldn’t take her because it was dangerous. I went to the hospital which was nearest, two doctors came with me and cure Xiao Yang at once, and when she felt better, we took her to the hospital. We are all students who do not live with parents. But the love between us makes us feel not lonely. The help between persons make alone people feel not lonely, but in contrast feel warm in heart. Not Xiao Yang but I felt warm. Sample 2 There were something wrong with my classmate, she was either ill or injure, but hurt in her deep heart. The phenomenon of her problem is she can’t remember the word she had repeated many times, she can’t remember the sentences she had to write on the examination paper. She always anxious abut her future life. I thought she must had something wrong with her spirit. In fact, It was true. The psychologist said that based on her poor childrenhood memory, she had the injured spirit , which influnt her spirit now. As we know , there are many worse problem in society, such as criminal ,suicide and so on. Many of the