看图作文中的图片描写.pptVIP

Checklist Does he/she include enough sensory? Are the details relevant to the topic? Do he/she use the proper order to organize the details? Do his/her sentences flow smoothly? Does he/she use figures of speech or varied sentence patterns? Are there any mistakes in spelling, grammar or punctuation? If so, please underline and correct them. Assignment: Revise your first draft according to the checklist. reference version As is vividly revealed in the cartoon picture, the boy is tied up with so many belts of extra classes that he feels tired and depressed. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that students are burdened with a lot of extra classes in their spare time. From my point of view, taking too many extra classes does more harm than good to students. Practice 看图作文中的图片描写 Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题） 1. 简要描述下列图片内容 2. 结合生活实际 谈谈自已的看法 3. 字数不少于100字 Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the ___________ . ii) Relate the _________ to a certain ____________ iii) Present your ___________ picture picture phenomenon opinion 简要描述图片内容，就图片主题谈谈自己感想。 Useful skills to describe a picture 1.在图中， 2.正如我们在图片中所能看到的， 3.正如图片所示， As we can see in the picture, As is vividly shown in the picture, In the picture, Describe Picture 1 according to the following questions. Is there any person that is immediately noticeable in the picture? What is the probable relationship between the girl and people around her? What are the people around the girl doing? 4. How do the people around the girl look like? 5. What can be learnt from the picture? Answer for reference: We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parents and grandparents around her are running with worried looks, sweating. By holding the bicycle, the girl’s families are trying their best to pr