高中英语写作技巧点拨一.pptVIP

写作技巧点拨一;劝说性写作：给朋友的信 【题目要求】 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike在给你的信中说，他想在暑假做兼职工作，但是他的父母不同意。请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。; 注意：1.词数：100词左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。;Dear Mike， Glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________ I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you. Best wishes. Li Hua;一、构思谋篇;二、关键词语;三、连词成句 1．你??在今年暑假做兼职工作，但是你的父母与你意见不一致。 You want to do a part-time job this summer vacation but your parents dont agree with you. 2．他们可能认为对你来说学习是最重要的任务。 They may regard learning as the most important task for you.; 3．他们想让你充分利用这个假期学习。 Theyd like you to make good use of the vacation to study. 4．你应该为你的学习和工作制订一个详细的计划。 You should make a detailed plan for your study and work.;四、连句成篇 Dear Mike， Glad to hear from you. I have learnt from your letter ①that you want to do a part-time job this summer vacation but your parents dont agree with you. I think your parents may have their reasons. They may ②regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to ③make good use of the vacation to study. Besides, they may think ④you are ⑤too young to work.;⑥In my opinion, youd better ⑦have a good talk with them. ⑧If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work. And you can also ⑨tell your parents not to worry about you ⑩because you are old enough to manage your own things well. I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you. Best wishes. Li Hua; [亮点点评] 亮点一：本文思路清晰，要点齐全。首先表达了收到笔友来信时的高兴心情，接着介绍对方面临的问题，引出话题，然后分析可能的原因并提出自己的建议，最后表达自己的希望，是一篇不错的范文。;亮点二：文中运用了很多复杂的句型，如①是that引导的宾语从句，该宾语从句是一个由but连接的表示转折关系的并列句；④是省略引导词that的宾语从句；⑧是if引导的条件状语从句；⑩是because引导的原因状语从句。另外，⑤too...to及⑨tell sb. not to do sth.等经典句型的运用也为文章增色不少。 亮点三：文中还运用了许多高级词汇，如②regard sth. as ③make good use of ⑥in my opinion ⑦have a good talk with sb.等，体现了作者拥有较大的词汇量。;——写作提升—— 你是李华，你很烦恼。最近，每天早晚，你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞，持续时间长且噪音大，给你和小区里其他人带了很多的不便……请你给小区委员会领导写封信，反映现象及其导致的不便(要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面)并提出合理建议。 注意： 1．词数120左右； 2．短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：广场舞 square dance　组织者 organizers;Dear Sir， I am writi