高中英语基础写作步骤.pptVIP

;请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英文日记。;1;1.上周日(我)和同学去西山野炊。 2.八点(我们)在校门口出发，步行到山脚。 3. (我们)半小时后爬到山顶，然后在山上欣赏美景。 climbed to the top of the mountain, 4.（我们）照相，玩扑克，午餐，玩得开心。 took photos, 5.午餐后，(我们)感到筋疲力尽。(我们)下山回家。 felt tired; ;1.上周日(我)和同学去西山野炊。 2.八点(我们)在校门口出发，步行到山脚。 3. (我们)半小时后爬到山顶，然后在山上欣赏美景?? climbed to the top of the mountain, 4.（我们）照相，玩扑克，午餐，玩得开心。 took photos, 5.午餐后，(我们)感到筋疲力尽。(我们)下山回家。 felt tired; ;第3步：连词成句;;4.（我们）照相，玩扑克，吃午餐，玩得开心。 a)We took photos, played cards and had a picnic (lunch). b)We had a good time. 4).Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time . ;5. 午餐后，感到筋疲力尽。 (我们)下山 回家。 a)After the picnic lunch, we felt very tired. b)We went down the mountain and came home. ;第4步：组句成篇 ;第5步: 检查润色;;:恰当使用连接词; September 8th Sunday cloudy Last Sunday my classmates and I went to West Mountain to have a picnic. /______ we set out at 8 from our school gate, ______ then we walked to the foot of the mountain. /______ half an hour, we climbed to the top of the mountain, ______ we enjoyed the nice scenery. / Taking photos, playing cards and having a picnic lunch, we had a good time there. /_________, we felt very tired soon, _____ we went down the mountain and came home. ; ;1、巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：;;;;;The steps of basic writing:;Homework：;时间 ; 一、审题:;二、整合成5个中文句子:;广州市少年宫---; Last Saturday I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Children’s Palace，whose theme was “Protect Our Earth’’. After I looked for information in the library and on the net, I prepared a draft for the speech. And to my joy, I got the third place at last. By participating in this contest, I understand that self-confidence is very important . Besides, I also realize that only by using English constantly can we improve our English .