英语人教版九年级全册My Dream写作课.pptxVIP

英语写作课授课人：高家店中学郝明 2016年9月23日规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你的梦想。Brainstorming:What’s your dream?My Dream体裁：________内容：分____部分，时态：记叙文3 1. What is your dream? 2. The reasons of your dream3. The things you will do 一般将来时为主Useful expressionsThe first part: 1. My dream is to be/do… (开门见山）2. Everyone has his dream. My dream is…3. For my dream, I will… 4. When I grow up, I am going to …5. I want to be /do… when I grow up6. Ever since my childhood, I have had a dream of…7. As the saying goes, “Dream is the sun of life.”/ There is a saying, “…”(俗话说得好…)Useful expressionsThe second part: 1. The reason why I have this dream is that…2. There are many reasons for this dream. First,…second , …third,…finally… Firstly,…secondly,…then…at last… For one thing,… for another,… On the one hand,… On the other hand,… To begin with/First of all…besides… what’s more3. I remember … So I want to…4. I will be/do… because…Useful expressionsThe third part: 1. In a word, I will try my best to… to make my dream come true.2. In short, to make my dream come true, I must take actions…3. To realize my dream , I must…4. In my opinion, I will…5. As far as I am concerned, I’m going to…6 . In conclusion, now I should…My Tips :How to Get High Marks in your composition善于使用形容词、副词、短语、比较级善于使用排比、插入语、被动语态、衔接词善于使用低难度高亮度的 词善于使用语气词、地道英语善于使用强调句型，长短句交替使用保证不出错，争取出彩 Sample: My Dream China Dream is made up of all Chinese people’s dreams. As a middle school student, what’s my dream? I dream of becoming a teacher when I grow up, and I hope to work in my old school. Because I want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well. I’ll also try my best to teach my students as my teachers taught me. To achieve my dream, I’ll have to study harder from now on, I’ll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I meet. I’m sure my dream will come true as long as I hold on to it. If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China Dream must come true and China will get better and better. zxxkw学科网Writing:Practice makes perfec