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PAGE PAGE 2 第一讲 审题准，要点全，抓住阅卷老师第一眼保基本分 五、(一)、审题 1．本文为 申请信 ，体裁属于应用文 。 2．时态以一般现在时 和一般将来时 为主。 3．人称为第 一 人称。 (二)、拟点(用汉语列出本文的写作要点) 1．介绍家庭成员及居住、交通条件。 2 说明英语交流沟通水平。 3．安排美国朋友参加的家庭活动。 4 表达愿望。 六、1．补写下面缺少的两个要点 (1)说明英语交流沟通水平。My good command of English makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life. (2)表达愿望。In a word ,I’m eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign visitors. Hope you can take my application into consideration. 2．将下列表达错误给以改正 (1)时态错误：①句应改为：I live with my parents who are caring and friendly. (2)语法错误：②句应改为：Our home is next to the city center, where easy shopping access and convenient transportation are available. (3)人称错误：③句应改为：Whats more, we can have a tour around the city, getting the students to know more about real life and culture in China. 第二讲 表达明、错误少，不给阅卷老师添烦恼少丢分 一、考场作文10大错误 1．主谓一致错误 误：Qianmen Street, a famous one in Beijing, have a history of 600 years. 正：Qianmen Street, a famous one in Beijing, has a history of 600 years. 误：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 误：Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight. 正：Dr. Smith, together with his wife, is to arrive on the evening flight. 2．时态、语态错误 误：In the morning, we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees. 正：In the morning, we bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees. 误：It is high time that we do something to reduce pollution. 正：It is high time that we did something to reduce pollution. 误：One day I told Mr. Wang, my maths teacher, was ill. 正：One day I was told Mr. Wang, my maths teacher, was ill. 误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3．句子成分残缺 误：If no self-confidence, all our dreams would merely daydreams. 正：If we had no self-confidence, all our dreams