雅思写作评分标准和范文赏析.ppt

知识回顾Knowledge Review 考官评语： the range of grammatical structures used is the aslo wide, with only occasional minor errors. 有小错误 揭秘雅思写作5.5-6.5 让雅思写作不再成为拦路虎 一/最熟悉的陌生人 评分标准 1. Task Reponse（文章回应） 2. Coherence and cohesion ( 连贯性与衔接） 3. Lexical Resource （词汇资源） 4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy ( 语法范围和准确性） 很多考生都忽略了评分标准，其实仔细阅读，你会发现写作分数可以有质的提高。 task response 9. fully addresses all parts of the task presents a fully developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas 8. sufficiently addresses all parts of the task prersents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas 7. addresses all parts of the task presents a clear position throughout the response presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus. 6. address all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others presents a relevant position although the conclusion may become unclear or repetitive presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear ad task response 对9分的描述是最少的，所以里面包含的信息量不大。 9分标准的第一点是fully addresses all parts of the task. 也就是说9分作文需要全面回答问题。比如题目要求discuss both views 就一定要讨论双方观点；题目中如果要求解释原因，并给出解决方案，就一定要解释原因和提出解决方案。这个看似简单的标准却是最容易被忽视的。你可能常常听到很多人抱怨文章写跑题了，其实就是没能完全回应主题。 解决方案： 圈出关键词并据其写出outline task response 的9分标准的第二点是： presents a fully developed response to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas. 这一点很重要，也是绝大多数母语非英语的考生很难把握的一点。 a fully developed response 和 fully extended and well supported ideas是雅思写作的核心，意思就是作文内的论点要有提炼和展开，考生要具体说明并解释自己的观点。 7分的标准对于提炼和展开有了进一步的解释，给出了具体的要求，就是要presents表述， extend 展开and supports 支持main ideas 解决方案： 主题句+解释+例子 7分标准的第二点指出雅思大作文要presents a clear position throughout the response, 意思是要有一个清楚的贯穿全文的立场。清楚的立场指的是在大作文中，作者要立场鲜明（中国人的中庸之道不受西方人待见），贯穿全文是指开头要陈述观点，结尾要总结重申。 6分的标准第一点仍然要求全面地回答问题，但是some parts may be more fully covered than others, 有