月考作文小汽车的利与弊.ppt

月考作文讲解 书面表达 【作文要求】现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，假设你是张伟，请根据下列表格所提示的信息，给报社编辑写一封信，发表你对此的看法。词数100左右。? 优点?：?? 1.有了小汽车，能来去自如? 2.?能节省时间? 3.?开小汽车旅游比较舒适 ?4.?开小汽车比骑自行车安全 缺点?：1.?越来越多的小汽车会带来严重的污染?2.?引起交通拥堵和更多的交通事故? 建议：?政府要适当控制小汽车的数量? Dear?editor, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,???????????????????????????????????????? ?Zhang?Wei? 学生作文卷面 学生作文中错误表达 1.With our country develops rapidly, there are more and more cars in our country. 2.There are many people are planning to buy their own cars. 3.People can go to anywhere they want to. 4.People have cars can go and come freely. 5. Cars can save you lots of time, and you can go and back anywhere freely. 6. By cars to travel is comfortable. 7. it is comfortable to travel by the car. 8. By car is safer than by bike.(x) 9. Driving a car is more safer than cycling. 10. Cars cause many pollutions are harmful to the environment. 11.The most important thing is driving a car is much safer than cycling. 学生作文中优秀句子 1.With the development of the society, people are planning to buy their own cars. 2.There is no denying that cars are of great use. 3.It is very convenient for people to travel by car. 4.It is very comfortable for us to travel by car. 5.Driving a car is much safer than cycling. It is much safer by car than by bike in our daily life. 6.Cars cause some pollution, which is harmful to our environment. 7.The government should take some effective measures to control the number of cars. 8.Only in this way can we solve air pollution. 写作步骤 一 ：审题 二 ：抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲? 三 ：想词组句 四 ：连句成段： 五 ：连段成篇 六 ：复查纠错 一 审题 （1）审要求：书面表达试题一般都由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。 （2）审文体：书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等。审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错。? （3）审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰