TEM8 2011年翻译部分讲解.pptVIP

句[2]学生译文（1）：But in reality, person now tend to be in a frequent hurry among the two lifestyles, and sometimes even themselves couldn’t tell whether he is at leisure or in a hurry. (2分样卷) 以上译文出自一份2分样卷，形态上错误很多，主要是数（number）、格（case）的问题。人们应该用people ,而不是person。 “两种（生活方式）间”应该是between..., 而不是among ...。原文“有时也说不清自己到底是‘休闲着’还是‘匆忙着’”，译文主语是they, 是themselves；whether he is应改为whether they are。试比较： cf. But in reality, people now tend to be in a frequent hurry between the two lifestyles, and sometimes even they couldn’t tell whether they are at leisure or in a hurry. 句[3]学生译文(1)：For example, we may rece