英语周记写作讲解学习.pptVIP

Writing a Diary;Revision 如何写英文日记;;Days:;Months:;7月 ----July (Jul.) 8月 ----August (Aug.) 9月 ----September (Sep.) 10月 ----October (Oct.) 11月 ----November (Nov.) 12月 ----December (Dec.) ;晴 --- Fine; Sunny; Shining； 雨 --- Rainy; Raining; 雪 --- Snowy 阴 --- Overcast 雾 --- foggy 多风 ---Windy 多云 ---Cloudy 暴风雨 --- Stormy; Thundering 阵雨 --- Shower ;2. 正文： 日记一般用过去时态。 使用第一人称。 经过：按事情发生的先后顺序来记述。所以常用at first, then, later on, soon, at last等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。 结尾： 发表自己的感想或评论，可根据具体情况使用过去时态、现在时态或将来时态。;常用的单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：;10月20日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。 根据下面的图表用英语写一篇日记。 6：30：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路欣赏风景、唱歌 8：30：到达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、了解自然 13：00：野炊、乘车回家 有点累，但是很开心 要求：用first、 next 、then和 finally等连词 使日记连贯,可适当加一些感受。;[写作过程] 1. 审题确定格式、体裁、时态、人称等 写作要点。 2. 列出提纲，确定开头句、扩展句和总 结句，选择好适宜的句型。 3. 利用一些关联词或者过渡句把句子有 机地连接起来，必要时可适当增加细节。 4. 仔细检查，适当修改，保证句子结构完 整，要点齐全，人称时态主谓一致。 5. 认真誊写，卷面整洁。;Step 1: Form;;Today my classmates and I went to Hongxin Farm for travel. I got up at 6:30 We set off by bus. We had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. We arrived at the gate of the farm. The farmers waited to give us a warm welcome. We were shown around the big farm.;We began to plant trees. It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment. I had a delicious picnic with my classmates. We were on the way back. Although we were all very tired, our travel was really unforgettable. ;Step 3: connect the sentences with conjunction words and make the article better with your partner;Oct. l0st, Sunday,　 sunny Today I as well as my classmates went to Hongxin Farm for travel. First, I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus. On the bus, we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Then two hours later, we arrived at the gate of the farm, where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, we began to pla