高中英语Module2High lights of My Senior Year 写作园地_事物简介：理想的高中外研版选修7.docVIP

PAGE 高中英语 Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year 写作园地-事物简介：理想的高中 [感悟范文] 某报社正在举办征文活动，请你以《我理想的高中生活》为题写一篇短文，以便投稿。短文内容必须包括： 1．你的个人信息：姓名(李萍)、年龄、所在年级和班级、你最喜欢的科目、学校类型、你认为假期多长最为合理。 2．你最喜欢参加什么样的课外活动小组以及原因。 3．你理想的学校中最重要的是什么。为什么？ 注意：1.词数：100左右； 2．参考词汇：intellectual智力的。 [范文] My Ideal Senior High School Life My name is Li Ping. Im seventeen and Im in Class One，Grade Two of senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best. ① I prefer a large school to a small one. ② As far as Im concerned, the vacation should be about a month. I like competitive sports, so I think my ideal high school should have such after-school clubs as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club ③ and so on. In this way I can not only build my body but also make many friends. In my view, a school should ③ put importance on both the development of social skills and the development of intellectual skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future. [技法讨论] 本文为半开放作文，要求学生针对题目要求提出自己的观点。每一段围绕一个中心，切忌一段话写到底。 对于此类作文，同学们要在用词准确的基础上，言之有物，条理清晰，能自圆其说。 写此类作文时，通常使用一般现在时。 常用句式 1. My ideal senior high school is like this. 2. It should be an individual school. 3. We have a lot of free time to take part in out-of-class activities. 4. We can borrow books from the library. 5. There should be many associations. 6. Teachers and students get along well with each other. 黄金表达 1．要点信息 ①与……相比更喜欢…… prefer...to... ②就……而言as far as sb./sth.is concerned ③等等and so on ④在我看来in my view/opinion ⑤把重点放在……上 put importance on... 2．一句多译 就我而言，假期应该是大约一个月。 ①I think we should have a vacation of about a month. ②I think there should be a vacation about a month. ③In my opinion, the vacation should be about a month. ④As far as I am concerned, the vacation should be about a month. 亮点分析： 本文亮点颇多，能按照半开放性作文的要求提出观点，并论证观点，实为一篇佳作。 ①正确运用复杂的结构prefer...to...，not only...but also... ②准确使用了本模块中所学的短语as far as Im concerned，达到了学以致用的目的。 ③and so on, put importance on短语的使用体现了作者较高的写作水平和语言运用能力。 [类文演练] 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨