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高考书面表达解题指导 What makes a good article? Beautiful handwriting Large vocabulary Various sentence structures Correct grammar Proper conjunctions …… Learning goals: By the end of the class, We will learn to tell whether the content is precise and to the point by reading two examples. We will be aware of the importance of being to the point when writing a passage. We will know how to create effective writing by writing back to a letter. If you are asked to donate an hour every day, what would you do and why? Example One Li Hua’s answer The answer of the student’s in Example one relax himself pick up his dream be a good son ( help do the housework, spend more time with his family ) What does “donate” mean? donate books to the library donate money to the charities donate our blood “donate” means doing sth. good or useful for the public If you are asked to donate an hour every day, what would you do and why? Example One Li Hua’s answer Student A’ s answer relax himself pick up his dream be a good son ( help do the housework, spend more time with his family ) Possible version From your reply, I can see you misunderstand the word “donate”, which has something to do with helping others. You may get to the point if the question is put like this: “If you can spare an hour every day, what would you do and why?” If I were you, I would answer the question like this. First, I will spend half an hour walking around the school, picking up rubbish. As students, we all wish to live and study in a clean environment. Second, I will use another half an hour to help my neighbor’s son with his lessons because his parents are too busy. By doing so, I not only help others, but also benefit a lot from what I do. I hope my answer will be of some help to you. 下面这幅照片展现了志愿者活动的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容： 1．简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等； 2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； 3．举例说明你将选择什么样的 志愿者活动并陈述原因。 Volunteers make a difference! Example two