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七种提分的写作技巧 1不要总是以有生命的名词或人称代词开头 [例1]People experience many great changes in the last half century. 低分 Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectation. 高分 [例2]Students should certainly make continuous efforts. 低分 Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainly required. 高分 技巧：找到原句中的非生命的名词短语，把它变成主语。 [例3] birth control is quite necessary in China. 低分 It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China. 高分 技巧：使用主语从句。Many people think=It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted.. [例4]More and more people agree/realize/are aware that women should enjoy full equality with men. 低分 There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that women should enjoy full equality with men. 高分 技巧：使用存在句there be句型。More and more people agree/realize/are aware that...=There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that ... [例5]Many Chinese people have gone to the United states in the past 15 years. 低分 The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States. 高分 技巧：用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如：The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthroughs in every aspect. 英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。 [例1]They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people. 低分 A lot of innovations are made to with the aim of making money for a few people. 高分 技巧：宾语变主语。 [例2]We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children. 低分 More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children. 高分 技巧：动词变名词。 不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子；不要对动词过于依赖，要学会名词或介词结构来表达意思。 [例1]Even if you believe change is inevitable, this does not mean “change is always for the better”. 低分 However, reaching the conclusion that change is evitable is not the same as assuming that “change is always for the better”. 高分 技巧：使用同位语从句。 [例1]If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles ar