写作指导顺序.pptVIP

写作 基础写作 作文示范 请根据以下的情景说明，使用 5个规 范的英语 句子描述所给的全部信息内容： Lucy家附近有超市； 她喜欢逛超市； 超市里商品物美价廉； 超市购物方便； 她对超市今后的希望。 Shopping in the supermarket There is a big supermarket near Lucy’s home. She likes to go shopping with her mother there. On one hand, the goods in the supermarket are excellent in quality and reasonable in price. On the other hand, it is convenient for customers to go shopping there. As a result, Lucy hopes that there will be more supermarkets in the city and the things in the supermarket will be better and better.（80词左右） 扩句成文时需要注意的： 整文要把内容归类整合，把单一的内容扩展丰富，把复杂的内容简单化。注意文章内容的完整性。 句子要用正确的句型表达出来，长短有致，通过分句和合句，增强句子连贯性和表现力。 学会使用关联词，使句与句之间更连贯更通顺。 关联词的使用： 1.递进： furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition… 2.转折： however, but… 3.总结：in a word, all in all, in short, to sum up, in conclusion 4.强调： in fact, especially, what is more 5.让步：although, though, even though/if 6. 并列：and , also, as well, either…or, both…and… 7.顺序：first, second, third on one hand…, on the other hand… firstly…,then…,besides…, finally… 8. 结果： as a result, therefore, so , thus Exercises:一、Combine the following sentences , using the link words. His mother is sick. The children are sick. ----His mother is sick, the children are sick as well. ---- his mother is sick, the children are sick. Jane is careful. Her sister is careless. ----Jane is careful / her sister is careless. 3. It was raining outside. We just stayed at home. ----It was raining outside, ___ / ________ , we just stayed at home. ----It was raining outside, ___ ___ _______，we just stayed at home. 4. Our teacher is strict with us. We all respect him. ----__________ our teacher is strict with us, we all respect him. ----Our teacher is strict with us, ____ we all respect him. Practice:请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 假如你叫李华，你的朋友周亮最近开始吸烟，请你给他写封信，劝他不要吸烟了。因为： 1.学校禁止吸烟， 学生吸烟违反学校的规定。 2.吸烟有害健康，会导致癌症的发