考博英语---作文(3).ppt

开头 写作要求： 引入话题 确定写作立场 为正文部分做好铺垫 可适当借用题干的表述，但不可原文照抄 开门见山，不要迂回，绕来绕去 可总述下文即将论述的观点，点出关键词即可，避免开头太长，以至于结尾时总结前文分析观点时难以复数。 例8 P153：What is the one thing that youve leraned from doing sports which applies to all aspects of your life? Please use examples to illustrate your points. (201303) 请找出中心句，连词，从句，难词 Teamwork is not the only one but the most important one that I have learned from experiences of different sport activities. Its teamwork that makes us join hands together to cultivate a safety situation that every teammate can exert their skills and energy utterly without concerning whether there is an assult coming from the back, and multiplies our competence as a team is more powerful than any individual who acclaims to be the strongest. Not only in sports, but also in works within different areas, cooperation is crucial. (87词) 开篇点题 ( ( ( ) ) ) 分析团队合作 承上启下 例 9 P155：Do you agree that history repeats itself? Provide examples to support your points. （2012年3月） Some learned people claim that history repeats itself. They firmly draw the conclusion by reading through historical articles of both foreign and domestic affairs. By comparison of ancient time and modernization age, they could probably, to some extent, have a prudent deduction about the soon-to-come development of our society. (49词) To the best of my knowledge, I would like to support this standpoint. ( ) ( ) 开篇点题 分析他人得出该结论的原因 ( ) 正式表明自己的观点，开始论述 开头容易出现的问题 1. 不加改变地照抄原题， 容易导致文章逻辑不清，结构不连贯。过长的题目更不可原文照抄。 解决方法： 需要确立观点的，选取与自己观点相符合的那部分稍作改动 需要举例列出原因的，简要地阐述自己将叙述的几个方面的关键词。 开头容易出现的问题 2. 使用过于陈旧的表达或者错误地表述成语 解决方法： 尽量避开使用 “every coin has two sides”或者 “with the development of science and technology”类似的表达方法 不确定的成语宁可不用。例如P157样卷3开头 “There is a good saying, ‘take actions after carefully thinking’”，作者试图表达“三思而后行”，但是正确的英语表达是“Look before you leap. / Think twice before you do”. 练习 3 请就下列作文题写出相应的开头部分。 People who claim to have supernatual powers, like Wang Lin, Yan Xin and many others, have come