2020版中考英语新素养大一轮杭州（人教）专用（课件)：话题写作02　事物介绍.pptxVIP

杭州专版新课标（RJ）第一篇　教材考点梳理话题写作（二）事物介绍【话题点睛】主要涉及的话题有物品介绍、失物招领等。主要涉及的要点:学习用品、生活用品、发明物等在外形、颜色、功能、用途、操作步骤以及特点等方面的介绍。典例分析　[2019·杭州]假定你是李平(Tel,家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80 左右。From: Mr. Smith, hotel managerHi, Li Ping,　Thank you for your email about your lost wallet.　Please send me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in? Please describe your wallet. What was in it? Send me your address and phone number.　All the best,Mr. Smith To: Mr. SmithSubject: Lost walletDear Mr. Smith,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ping 【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是回复有关钱包遗失的经过和对所丢失钱包的具体描述。文章主要可从三个部分展开叙述:(1)描述丢失钱包的时间和场所;(2)具体描述钱包。可以从颜色、大小和里面的物品展开描述;(3)告知自己的联系方式。2.确定时态:描述丢失钱包的时间和场所时,用一般过去时;描述钱包时,用一般现在时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示词补全下列各句。1. 基础句 它不大不小。(or) .→ 升格句 它既不太大也不太小。(neither…nor…) .It is/Its not big or small.It is/Its neither too big nor too small.2.基础句我的身份证、两张信用卡和一张100美元的钞票在我的钱包里。(and) .→升格句我的身份证、两张信用卡和一张100美元的钞票在我的钱包里。(as well as) . My ID card, two credit cards and a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet.My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet. 3.基础句你能通过快递把钱包发给我吗?(can) . .→升格句能劳驾你通过快递把钱包发给我吗?(Would you be kind enough to…?) . . .Can you send the wallet to me by express?/Can you send me the wallet by express?Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet by express?/Would you be kind enough to send the wallet to me by express?【连句成文】Dear Mr. Smith,　Thank you so much for your reply. 　I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. It is neither too big nor too small. My ID card, two credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet.　Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet by e