高考高分作文指导.pptVIP

Houji High School Liu Chunxia 1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是 语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具有较强的语言运用能力。 1 汉语式英语 2 句式单一 平铺直叙 3 无过渡语 Common mistakes in writing 1 　如何在写作中避免句式单一 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.