高考英语写作训练系列(二)-(公开课件).pptVIP

 阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文? 字迹工整,卷面整洁； 紧扣主题,条理清晰； 语言地道,过渡自然； 长度适中.一气呵成． 阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文? 涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点； 层次不清，段落不分； 语句不通，杂乱无章； 书写潦草，卷面不洁； * A good medicine tastes bitter. Easier said than done. 高考英语写作训练系列（二） 把握英语写作评分标准提高英语写作的针对性 英语写作训练系列----第二部分 教学目标： 1、学生了解并掌握高考英语作文评分标准。 2、学生能根据高考英语作文评分标准进行作文分析。 3、学生能基本根据高考英语作文评分标准进行英语写作。 作文题目 （03全国卷） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。 Dear Bob: I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. Hope you will come here soon! All the best!  Yours, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua  满分理由： 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，使用了以‘which’引导的非限定性定语从句等结构，从而使文章的语言富于变化。行文流畅自然，层次分明不愧为考场佳作。 Dear Bob, 　　 How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School. There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like