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模板来自于 4 写作 抓住细节 运用你的想象合理扩展一句话，恰当地添加动作、表情、神态、语言、心理等将这句话的内容充实起来。*她骂他懦夫（《樱桃》山菊骂红红野孩子）**她骂他道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加语言）***她用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加动作）****她早已被气得浑身颤抖，脸色铁青，怒睁杏目，用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加神态）其实她早已被气得浑身颤抖，脸色铁青，但她还是在不断的告诫自己：不要失态、不要骂人！最终她实在是忍不住了，于是怒睁杏目，用手指着他的鼻子骂道：“你真是一个懦夫”（添加心理） 细节描写文学作品中对人物动作、语言、神态、心理、外貌以及自然景观、场面气氛等细小环节或情节的描写。 使读者如见其人，如睹其物，如临其境。?细节描写在刻画人物性格、丰满人物形象、连接故事情节、丰富作品内涵等方面具有重要作用。生动的细节描写，有助于折射广阔的生活画面，表现深刻的社会主题。 方法一：?精用动词 我看见他戴着黑布小帽，穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地走到铁道边，慢慢探身下去，尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不容易了。他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子。这时我看见他的背影，我的泪很快地流下来了。?（摘自朱自清《背影》） 方法二：巧用修饰语 父亲佝偻着身子，慢慢地朝前面一个小店走去。进了店门，父亲堆着满脸的笑：“老板，生意好！请帮帮忙，换两张大钞票。”笑着说着，贴满膏药的手伸进夹衣口袋，抖抖索索地摸出一大把钱，摊到柜台上，当着老板的面，几分的，几角的，半天才凑足了20块钱。(摘自《山路弯弯》) 方法三：巧妙的运用修辞 对事物加以淡妆浓抹，能使语言增亮增色，提高文章品味给人以美感。 母亲曾经有过一头浓密的黑发，柔软、亮洁、光泽，由于一生辛劳，捧出所有的心血，奉献最纯洁的母爱，来抚育我们成长，所以未老先衰，四十几岁，头发开始花白。先是两鬓染霜，后来是额前飘白，就象春天黛青的远山里悄然冒出一抹残雪，一丝丝，一缕缕垂在饱经风霜的脸上，再后来脑前脑后全沾满了白发，白得我们儿女们心疼。?????????? 总之，好的细节描写，就犹如一座座精美的灵魂，有了它才能使人物性格鲜明，形象栩栩如生。 抛砖引玉 03 01 02 精用动词 服务巧用修饰语 巧妙的运用修辞 抓住细节 写作实践 Reader, I married him. A quiet wedding we had: he and I, thmore or less Constance Chatterleys position. The war had brought the roof down over her head. And she had realized that one must live and learn.She married Clifford Chatterley in 1917, when he was home for a month on leave. They had a months honeymoon6. Then he went back to Flanders: to be shipped over to England again six months later, more or less in bits. Constance, his wife, was then twenty-three years old, and he was twenty-nine.His hold on life was marvellous. He didnt die, and the bits seemed to grow together again. For two years he remained in the doctors hands. Then he was pronounced a cure, and could return to life again, with the lower half of his body, from the hips7 down, paralysed for ever.This was in 1920. They returned, Clifford and Constance, to his home, Wragby Hall, the family `seat. His father had died, Clifford was now a baronet, Sir Clifford, and