书面表达指导.pptVIP

书面表达 instructions I Prof Stephen Hawking, one of Britain’s pre-eminent（杰出的） scientists, has said that efforts to create thinking machines pose a threat to our very existence. II A father in Changzhou city of Jiangsu caused an online furor when he posted that he has been playing computer games with his son, a sixth grader in primary school, for five years, and believes playing the games fosters creativity and intelligence. Simplify the above news I What harm can the robots do people? II Is it good for adolescents to play computer games? Why? What harm can the robots do people?? 1.让人类失业 2.让人类变懒惰，不适当活动对身体有害 3.极端发展会取代人类 4……. 5……. Is it beneficial for adolescents to play computer games? Why? 1.培养电脑基础知识? 2. 培养反应力和合作能力 3.舒缓学习压力 4……. (para.2) To begin with（过渡衔接）, with robot working day and night, many bosses will use more robots instead of workers. Thus（过渡衔接）many workers are in the danger of losing jobs. There is no doubt that we will see a large number of people who are under unemployment(要点1) because of the them. (para.2) In addition（过渡衔接）, with robots doing many different kinds of jobs, people may become much lazier（要点2） than before. I think that is not good for humans. People need to do some things to keep healthy.? (para.2) What is worse（过渡衔接）, according to professor Hawking ,with more and more robots invented and produced, the robots will take charge of the earth （要点3）, which may be the worst thing that people are not willing to see.? (para.3) In conclusion, I deeply believe that the developmemt of robots will do harm to humans.(总结) Evaluation 1内容清楚连贯（使用连接词） 2结构完整（议论文的三段式） 3主题突出（每段都有主题句） 4用词及文体得当（使用较高级和地道短语） 5.卷面工整，符号正确 《考试大纲》规定： 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，例如根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；根据文字提示或图表信息写短文或报告；根据提示要点叙述事情，表达观点和态度等。做到： 1内容清楚连贯 2结构完整 3主题突出 4用词及文体得当 5.卷面工整，符号正确 1 评分原则 本题总分为25分，按照5个档次给分。 ——先确定其所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 ——词数上下差距20词，从总分中减2分。 ——评分时，应注意的主要内容为： 内容要点 应用词汇和语法结构（句型）的数量和准确性