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课件 Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum out weight the disadvantages? Museums can always attract great public attention for the significant role of protecting and spreading knowledge they play in the world. In order to better the maintenance of museum, some people suggest that many should be requested for the entrance of museum. However, althoughHowever和although不能连用，去掉however。英语当中虽然和但是不能连用。 I understand funds are crucial to improve exhibition quality and the protection of exhibits, I do not believe there