读后续写专题(1).pptVIP

以读助写·以写促写 读后续写 读后续写的具体内容 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5 第五档： 21-25 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 记叙文阅读理解能力 记叙文书面表达能力 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文所标出的关键词语。 所使用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 第四档： 16-20 读后续写： 读后续写题与其他写作题的最大不同之处在于，其答题形式是根据所给阅读材料和两个段落首句（也即主题句）进行续写。因此，续写部分必须与阅读部分保持高度的“协同性”。 协同性：续写的内容要与阅读短文及所给段落首句高度衔接，续写内容想象丰富，在语言表达上恰当应用较多（5个以上）短文中标有下划线的关键词语，模仿使用阅读材料中的词语和句型较多且使用得当，语言表达准确流畅，上下文思路连贯。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. Help! No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane b