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PAGE PAGE 1 2019高考英语全国II短文改错精细解析 黑龙江绥化一中 高考英语命题研究名师 高云峰 2019全国 = 2 \* ROMAN II卷短文改错试题 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. 【精细解析1】名词处理错误 解题逻辑思路：每遇名词必查2件事——单复数、泛特指。Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. 句中job受到different修饰，可见其需用复数形式，所以答案是把job改为jobs。 【精细解析2】词性串用错误（形-副串用） 解题逻辑思路：短文改错解题时，每遇形容词或副词，需要全覆盖查3件事——1.形副是否串用；2.比较等级（三级——原级、比较级、最高级）是否合理；3. v-ed/v-ing形式是否串用。 First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. 检查过滤该句中出现的副词coolly，因为它在句中在系动词looked（看起来）后作表语，作表语需用形容词，可知出现了形副串用，故，答案是把coolly改为cool。 【精细解析3】数词运用错误 解题逻辑思路：每遇数词，分清基序，即分清是基数词还是序数词。看文中题句Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because...，“五年级”的实际意思是第五学年，而不是五个学年，所以显而易见应该使用其序数词形式，把five改为fifth。 【精细解析4】语义逻辑题错误 把too改为so或者very。解题思路：短文改错10个错误里一般有一两个错误属于语义逻辑错误，即非语法错误。需要按原词理顺翻译全句就可发现是否存在这种错误。 Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.该句按原词理顺翻译全句为“接下来当我上五年级的时候，我想当个老师，因为我过于喜欢我的英语老师。”，可见其语义逻辑不通，应改为“接下来当我上五年级的时候，我想当个老师，因为我如此/非常喜欢我的英语老师。”，too much在英语中的意思是“太。。。/过于。。。”，所以应该把too改为so/very 。此题为副词运用错误导致的语义逻辑错误。 【精细解析5】缺少介词 看题句When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. 发现地点状语只使用一个地点名词，而英语的习惯是介词短语作地点状语，需添加一个介词。而填介词找搭配，和school搭配的介词在英语中通常用at或in。所以正确答案是在high school前加at或in。 【精细解析6】语义逻辑错误 把or改为and。重要提示：短文改错10个错误里一般有一两个错误属于语义逻辑错误，即非语法错误。解题逻辑思路：需要按原词理顺翻译全句就可发现是否存在这种错误。When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidere