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无老师作文巨讲堂 【篇一：无老师作文巨讲堂 2012 】 2012 年 01 月号 无老师优秀范例： a more realistic and rational criterion to value teachers ‘ work (and therefore decide their salary) should include factors such as comprehensive developments of students, teachers ‘ own capacity to cultivate and educate, and parents ‘ f ebeadc k . yet my disagreement does not suggest that students ‘ performance should be abandoned but rather included along with other indispensable factors in evaluating teachers ‘ work, since school report is still among most parents ‘ top concerns and students ha ve to use it as anchor when applying for further studies. also, it is reasonable that teachers who can enhance students ‘ performance should be paid better, as the measure would moderately motivate teachers to work hard. 无老师优秀翻译：一个衡量教师工作，同时也可以决定教师工资的 更为现实的，同时也是更为理性的标准应该包括如下这些因素，比 如对于学生的全面发展，教师自己的提升及教学能力，以及对于家 长的反馈。但是，我的意见并不是说学生的表现可以不被列入考察 范围，我认为当判断学生的表现的时候，应当结合评价教师工作的 很多其它必不可少的因素一起讨论，因为学生们最终的成绩还是大 多数家长最关心的，同时当学生们申请学校的时候要把这些成绩作 为一个衡量自己的标准。而且，那些能够提高学生成绩的教师得到 更好的报酬也是很合理的，因为只有这样的方法才会激励教师更努 力的工作。 无老师平庸范例： when we want to judge a teacher ‘s work, a more realistic and rational standard should include the following parts, such as, the students ‘ whole development, the ability of improving themselves and enhancing their educating, and the parents ‘ responses. but, i do not disagree with that we should not consider the students ‘ performance. when we want to judge the students ‘ performance, i believe that we should combine a lot of other indispensable parts of judging teachers ‘ work. because what most parents care about is the final scores, and the final scores also are important standard to determine the students. but also, the teachers who could promote the students ‘ score should get well paid, which could encourage the teachers to work hard. 无老师精析：遣词造句的差别才是真正决定一个人分数的高低，而 不是单纯的思路或者结构。思路或者结构真的只是皮毛之功，今天 的优秀范例与平庸范例就是一个很好的体现。这里优秀范例是典型 的满分作文，而平庸范例虽然意思上所查无几，但是最多也就是 18 分的水平，这就是遣词造句的实力的差别。 首先第一句：优秀范例 a more realistic and rational cri