英译汉教学 重复法 的四字对偶.pptVIP

CORD is my rock, y deliverer Aesthetics in Translation Instructor: Niu Chunling Course Description: E-C Translation  重复法 林语堂先生从美学的角度,把语言文字概括为五 美 他认为 翻译应尽郡能钱情类”。汉语的叠音 词,英语没伻輛螬的既興响喚学要素, 它的英译自然就值得我们研究 李清照的《声声慢》中的 。”十四个字,全是叠词,译文 怎么体现和再现原文的“左美”,这是译者应 追求的。  重复法 译文1 译文2 I seek but It seek in I look for what I miss my rock, my fortress and my deliverer vaIn, my Sod is my rock, in whom D tale refkknow not what it is I search and searCie horn ol my sal I feel so sad, so gain: drear, feel so sad, so So lonely, without ear, cheer.(许渊冲 So lonely, without chee y  重复法 文3 So dim, so dark So densey sSo cullon who m take refug. Ly deliverer So damp, so dank,y6ea!τ林铻堂译) 上三译,似无高低优劣之别,然而,当读者把 光投向表象要素时,林语堂译便闪闪发光,胜 筹!林语堂译不仅一气连用 更 好 林语堂译连用矿七个形容词,构成 不可多得的、A 李清照原诗的 钧遥相呼应,词趣洋渐  重复法 陈毅的《赴延安留别 On and on past 华中诸同志》一诗 Taihang we walk The CORD is my rock, my fortress and my deliverer my god is my rock, in thom D take rel w to Yanan Hle is my shield and the horn of my 过太行,  We make our way 赴延安。 again with 问故旧, old friends we talk. 星星数鬓斑 One by one we comint our hairs grey 许渊池译)  重复法 英语词汇的音节参差不齐, Threads from the hands 结构长短不一,所以不重 of a doting mother, 视用词的均衡和对褐濒tesm rked into the clothes 语十分讲求时 特别喜妖甭 ld and the horn of my Of, a. fasioffiourneying son 和 Before his departure were the close, fine 慈母手中线, tches set 游身上衣 Lest haply his return, be 临行缝, 意 (Tr. Amy Lowel  重复法 临行密密缝, Betore his departure, were the close, fine fine stitchesoaset ock, in whom o take refuge. 意恐迟迟岿。 Lest haply his return be long, long delayed 在英谛的过程中,汉语叠音词的这种表象要素 在难以留,让酸们发出可奈何花落去”的慨 叹。但英译汉时就可後汉语自这  1.注意使用四字重迭词 (1) vivid (5)tardy 磨磨蹭蹭 栩栩如生 ny fortress and()evasive (2) hesitate od is my rock. in whom 3 take rel躲闪闪 He is my shield and the horn o] my 犹犹豫豫 bus 忙忙碌碌 3)careless °(8) in order 马虎虎 ·整整齐齐 (9)in a hurry (4)ragged 急急忙忙 破破烂烂 0) clear 清清楚  1.注意使用四字重迭 All of these suits of clothes are beautiful 件件衣服都很漂亮。 Do