2020年人教版八年级下册期中考试专题特训之书面表达(附有范文详解).pdfVIP

人教版八年级下册期中考试题型特训之书面表达 书面表达(一) 根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与妈妈发生的故事。 ①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。 要求：①不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；②词数：100 左右；③ 开头已给出。 One day, Xiaoming saw a little girl fall down. _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 范文： One day ，Xiaoming saw a little girl fall down. He wanted to help the girl, but his mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, or there will be some trouble.” A few days later, the mother saw Xiaoming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiaoming said to his mother ，“If I had done something, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.” I disagree with the mother in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Everyone should do something good to make our society better, right? ◆名师点评： 本文行文流畅，层次清楚，准确表达了图片中反映的故事和折射出的深层道理。文章中 运用了宾语从句、定语从句、条件状语从句等复合句式，表现了作者深厚的写作基础。 ◆本文的添彩点： ①使用了复合句式： 条件状语从句If I had done something, you ... ；宾语从句I think parents...；定语从句．..to help others who are in trouble.②动词词组 let...be, knock over, set a good example, care for 等丰富了文章的表现力。 书面表达(二) 几天前，Linda 得了感冒，妈妈给她量了体温，发现她发高烧，要求她去医院。在 路上，她发现一个小男孩摔伤了膝盖，一位路过的叔叔正在给小男孩绑绷带。Linda 很 感动，带小男孩一起去了医院。请根据所给材料写一篇文章，描述一下故事梗概，并发 表自己的感慨。 提示词：pas