新版人教版八年级英语下册 Unit 2 点拨习题 写作素养提升练.pptxVIP

人教版八年级下 Unit 2 Ill help to clean up the city parks.写作素养提升练 人教版九年级下“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。帮助他人就是在帮助自己。你参加过城市公园的清扫活动吗？你参加过去敬老院看望老人的活动吗？你参加过公益组织分发传单的活动吗？……请你和大家分享一下你参加活动的乐趣吧！假如你是李华，上周日你和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小分队，去一所贫困的乡村小学服务。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的志愿活动。时间上周日地点一所贫困的乡村小学人物你和几位同学活动打扫学校，修理桌椅，赠送书籍和玩具……要求：1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实；3. 词数：80 左右。1.谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。2. 遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。(1)我喜欢做志愿活动，因为帮助他人使我快乐。I like ___________________, because ________________________________.(2) 上周日我和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小分队，去一所贫困的乡村小学服务。Last Sunday, several of my classmates and I ______________________________in a poor village school.helping others candoing volunteer jobsmake me happyset up ateam to volunteer(3)我们和那些学生一起打扫学校和教室。We ______________________________________ with the students.(4)我们帮助修理了教室里破损的课桌和椅子。We helped __________________________________ in the classroom.(5)我们向那些学生赠送了书籍和玩具。We ______________________________ to the students.cleaned up the school and the classrooms(to) fix up the broken desks and chairsgave away books and toys(6)为了让他们高兴起来，我们还和他们一起做游戏。In order to ______________, we also _____________________________.(7)我希望我们可以一直帮助他们。I hope ____________________ all the time.cheer them upplayed gameswith themwe can help them3.巧妙衔接：利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文中，可以使用first, then, after that 等表顺序的词来介绍我们所做的志愿活动，使文章显得有层次性。4. 佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。I got a feeling of satisfaction when I saw the look of joyon their faces.当我看到他们脸上开心的表情时，我有一种满足感。I think volunteering will make a big difference to our world.我认为志愿者工作会对我们的世界产生巨大的影响。It is better to give than to take. 施比受更有福。? 连句成篇：______________________________________________________________________________________________【品读范文】I like doing volunteer jobs because helping others makes me happy. Last Sunday, several of my classmates and I set up a team to volunteer in a poor village school. First, we cleaned up the school with the students. Then we helped fix up the broken desks and chairs in the classrooms. After that, we gave away books and toys to the students. To cheer them up, w