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UNIT 1 Appendix 1SampleAnalysis Now lookattwoversionsofanemailmessageandsee howwellwecanapplywhat we have discussed. Before revision To: JamesTomlinson jtomlinson@ From: Henry Francis hfrancis@ Subject: Problems This is in response to your recent inquiry about ourcustomerdatabase.Your message of May 9 saidthat youwantedto know how to dealwiththe database problems. I cantellyouthat the biggest problem is that it contains a lot of outdated information, including customers who haven’t purchased anything infive or more years.Another problem is that the old database is not compatible