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(一 )
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.
As everyone knows, it ’ s famountainous with all kinds of plants and animals.
The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.
The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,
we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
( 1)第一行: two-days 改为 two-day 第二行: mountain 前加 a
第三行: noon 后加 when 第四行: them 改为 us
第五行: visiting 改为 visited 第六行: pictures;passed
第七行:去 down 第八行: and 改为 but 第九行:去 at
(二)
Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not
be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they dont real need.
( 2)第一行: with 改为 on 第二行: many 改为 some 第三行: because of
第四行:删去 be;read 改为 reading 第五行: programs 第六行: noisy
第七行: On 改为 In 第八行:去掉 want 前的 to; real 改为 really
(三)
I ’ m the captain of our school team so with myfellow players
we’ ve won several games. Therewill an important game next month.
But one of the best player in our team told me just then that hewouldn ’ t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.
But his parents think go to college is more important than
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