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One possible version: As is illustrated in the report, Chinese parents, especially those born in the 1980s, have spent a large sum of money on extracurricular education to give their children an edge, but experts don’t agree with it. I fully understand that parents wish their children to have competitive advantages, yet I don’t believe it’s a wise choice to cram in too many expensive classes. First of all, spending too much money on extracurricular education does not necessarily bring about what parents desire. Secondly, so much extracurricular education might affect children’s normal life, th