中考英语作文总复习题与答案解析(99).docxVIP

2020 年中考英语作文总复习题 1． Writer a passage of at least 60 words on the topic _______Makes My life Better ． （以 ______ 使我的生活更美好 为题， 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号表不占 格．） 要求： 补全作文标题 短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息， 否则不予评分． 【分析】高分句型一： When I started middle school ， I was weak in English 此句是一般过去时的复合句．是由 when 引导的时间状语从句，意思是 当 ?的时候 ， be weak in 是一个固定短语，意思是： 在某方面很差．因此此句可翻译为 当我上中学的时候，我的英语很薄弱． 高分句型二 I often wrote English stories ． and shared them with my teachers and classmates ．此句是一般 过去时的陈述句． 运用短语 share ? with ? 和 ?分享 ，此句可翻译为 我经常写英语故事， 并和老师与同学们一起分享它们． 【解答】 Learning English well Makes My life Better ． Although  the  life  of  junior  three  is tense  ，尽管三年的生活很紧张．  but learning  English well  makes  my  life  better  ． （  要点一，点明要点）．  Now  my  English  has  greatly improved  ．When I started middle school  ，  I was weak in English  （高分句型一） ．  My English teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice  ． my classmates helped me  ． Then I began to work hard on it and was fond of it  ．  I often took part in some activities about English  and enjoyed myself ． I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books about English in my spare time ， Besides ，I often watch English movies on TV or computer ． I can learn about the culture and the local condition all over the world ． I often wrote English stories ． and shared them with my teachers and classmates ．（高分句型二） （要点二，如何学习英语的及 学好英语使我的生活更美好． ）． Now Im more interested in English and I get higher grades  ．Im pleased with English and thankful to my English teacher and my classmates  ．I really feel that learning English well makes my life better  ．（要点三，学好英语的感受．  ） 第 1页共 2页 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语 和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务 第 2页共 2页