高考英语一轮总复习 第三部分 写作指导 提分策略七 龙头凤尾 北师大版A.pptVIP

策略七　龙头凤尾;文章的开头很重要,它是文章的 “脸面”,是读者了解全文的 “窗户”。语言控制能力不强的考生最好采用“开门见山”式的开头,这有助于抓住重点、避免离题。从高考短文的可读性角度讲,提倡起笔即用概述性语言引出话题,以激发评卷老师的兴趣。 文章的结尾没有固定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活变化。叙事文和描写文的结尾,原则上是把事情说完,至少可以告一段落。在这两类文章中,可以把最重要或最有趣,或给人印象最深的一点放到最后说,这样便产生了一个高潮,使读者看完文章还可以有所回味。说明文和议论文在很多情况下,都是以某种结论性的话语来结束。高考英语短文写作的结论句一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。 ;典例　假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意:词数100左右。 ;【参考范文】 Last weekend,I helped my grandparents organize their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents,I searched the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel information.In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.After dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need,such as clothes,glasses,an umbrella,and a map.The next morning,I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. ;【思路点拨】 该试题要求考生写一篇英文周记,其实也是写一篇记叙文,叙述祖父母去北戴河旅行的准备过程。题目的呈现方式为四幅图片。第一幅图是事前准备,三个问号涉及要写出的三个方面,这属于关键的得分点,千万不能遗漏。第二幅图和第三幅图都是准备的过程,前三幅图的图画内容没有所谓的轻重之分,因此在写作的时候,要注意三幅图的比重要基本一致,不要出现一个图一句话带过,而其他图画重点描写的情况。最后一幅图,是故事的结尾。 文章开头可采用主题句,如:Last weekend,I helped my grandparents organize their trip to Beidaihe;结尾句可谈谈自己的感想和愿望,如:Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. ;(2016·山东日照第一中学期中考试)假设你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括: 1.乐观的人生态度; 2.努力学习; 3.参加体育锻炼。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things. ;【参考范文】 We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly,we should develop a good attitude to life.Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brave in face of difficulties.Secondly,we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help