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题目： Directions: Come and join us in volunteer work right now! On Volunteer 黄昕彤辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中 108 班 The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan （Longman）Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously （spontaneously）and willingly. Thats true! Life is a style ofenjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the process of helping others.Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country. Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), its like birds without wings, failing toshow its talents of flying, Its like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil. Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese peopleare shocking the world of its cooperation. I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team. I have a dream that oneday, Ill make contributions to China however slightest it may be. I have a dream thatone day Ill be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world. Im firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, allover the world, and for the great Global Village. 专家建议： 整篇文章条理清晰，结构完整，总体感觉很好。但有个别语法错误，固定 搭配有些用得不够准确，建议多用课本学过的固定搭配或是词组造句。 专家点评： 文章语言流畅，运用了修辞手法，展现出一定的语言功底。此外，论据生 动有力，让人信服。如果句子之间的多用些关联词就更好了。陈茜江苏省哈尔 滨市第三中学高三 18 班 1 / 5 Dear grandfather: How are you? The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know there are somany people are willing to help others although they cant get money from it. It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families.My dear grandfather, canre