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医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改 [关键词]医药论文英文摘要 1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。 2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。 1、原文： DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanning ZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalC ollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,Ch ina;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMe dicine,Wuhan430061,China) ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixueti ngliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwat er,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.Thesampleswe redeterminatedbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Result:Theaver agerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacid in3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion: Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable. KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid 修正： DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScannin g ZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege, HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2. TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine, Wuhan430061,China) AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxueti ngoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedind istilledwater,andthenextracted（intothesample删去）withwater-s aturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.Thesampleswe resubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λ R=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,（and删去） RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3（five删去）batchesofsam pleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethod