【精品课件】英语Unit5WorkingtheLandPeriod5课件.pptVIP

Period 5　Using Language(Ⅱ)写作培优课;写作素养提升;文体概述 发表议论时, 我们要注意三个要素: 1. 论点: 中心论点的鲜明性(一般在开头提出); 唯一性(不能像墙头草一样)。 2. 论据: 论据要真实可信; 具有典型性; 尽量新颖。 3. 论证过程: 通过论证证明论据和论点之间的内在逻辑关系, 将论据和论点融为一体。;框架构建 　　开头: 介绍农业发展概况和有机农业的出现。 Nowadays more and more people. . . /. . . plays an important role in. . . 　　展开论述: 分层次介绍化学农业和有机农业的比较以及有机农业的优势。 　　Firstly. . . , Secondly. . . , In addition/What’s more/Moreover. . . /Every coin has two sides. . . 　　结尾: 总结观点, 提出建议。 　　Through above analysis/All things considered, we can see. . . /Therefore. . . ;【典题示例】 　　关于有机农业和化学农业, 你们班举行了一场辩论。请结合你们的讨论结果, 写一篇支持有机农业的英语作文, 词数不低于80。 注意要点: 1. 化学农业的危害; 2. 有机农业的优点和理由; 3. 讨论的结果和大家的期待。;Step 1谋篇立意;Step 2语言支架 1. 化学农业和有机农业在现代农业中起着重要的作用, 关于这一点, 我赞成有 机农业。 ①__________________________　　在……中起重要作用? ②be in favour of __________ ③用非限制性定语从句翻译句子: __________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________;2. 留在作物里的化学物质会导致癌症或其他疾病。 ①stay inside the crops　　　　　　_____________ ②lead to _____ ③用动词-ing形式翻译句子: ________________________________________________________________?;3. 此外, 这些蔬菜长得很快, 几乎没有营养。 ①besides _________ ②___________ 如此……以至于…… ③翻译句子: __________________________________________________________?;Step 3润色成篇 　　Chemical agriculture and organic agriculture play an important part in modern agriculture, about which I am in favour of organic agriculture. 　　It is obvious that using chemical fertilisers has many disadvantages. The chemicals staying inside the crops can lead to cancer or other illnesses. Besides, the vegetables grow so fast that they contain little nutrition. ;　　Organic food is becoming increasingly popular with customers. There are many reasons for this. The first reason is that as people are richer, they attach great importance to health. Secondly, organic produce simply uses natural fertilisers, making vegetables and fruit tasty and nutritive. Moreover, the produce grows in clean water and is free of pesticides, which is beneficial to our health.