新教材译林版高中英语选择性必修第一册Unit3 The art of painting教学课件.pptVIP

Section Four: Assessment Further study 微技能三　高潮营造 故事中的高潮(climax)是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机”点。有时候，它只是达到了关键时刻或者转折点，发生了一些事情，或者主角必须做出决定，从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙述类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图标来表示故事情节。 Story mountain Background: This includes the introduction of characters and setting. Rising action: This includes the events leading up to the main problem or conflict. Climax: This is when the problem reaches a high point! Falling action: This is when characters work to solve a problem or conflict. Resolution: This is how things end up in the story. 语言输入——素材累计，为续写奠基 1．增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感，将故事推向必要的解决状态。 (1)角色之间的冲突 【示例】(2017·浙江11月)On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 【分析】开车找旅馆——徒劳无功——母亲建议在他人后院搭帐篷——David和“我”倍感紧张，心有不悦(母子的观点不一) (2)角色与环境之间的冲突 【示例】(2017·浙江6月)Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him…he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped…， he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back. shaking its head. But a minute later，…Then it…， tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back… 【分析】Mac骑车独行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。 (3)依赖时间的发展：决策变得刻不容缓 【示例】(2017·浙江6月)The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car.”Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 【分析】汽车突停面前——车主急喊上车——Max上车避险——饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景，刻不容缓) (4)增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战，以达到他们的目标 【示例】(2018·浙江6月)Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse…But before we