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^ | You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said: the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter. Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it s time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it. -- Guo Ge Tech 主体段 In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 剑5P53 好处： 旅游： 开阔视野——了解不地区文化， 历史——结交朋友——沟通能 力加强 工作：学习技能——增长经验——就业好处 坏处：离开学校——适应能力（学习） —— 下降—— 心情，自信心 下降—— 退学 提纲 A+ A- 思路六大原则 ①金钱原则 工作赚钱 旅游花钱 ②时间原则 浪费时间 ③科技原则 ④文化 /教育原则 开阔眼界 / 增加工作经验 耽误学习 ⑤健康 /道德原则 放松身心 造成犯罪 ⑥环境原则 论证四大方式 例证法，因果法，对比法，假设法 1.例证法 一般结构为： 主题句 +例子 +影响 +段落小结（支持段） 赚钱 工作能赚钱 +从事兼职在课余 +减轻家庭负担、增加工作经验 + 鼓励 工作 There is no reason to doubt that working for one year may gain obvious benefits in terms of economy, As is shown by the case of working in bank, the students who major in finance could not only obtain a wide range of knowledge of economy, but also earn much salary. It mean that it is helpful to find a well-paid job for individual on the way of future job-hunting, and tends to release the economic pressure t o some/great extent for whole family. (意义升华 横轴——范围扩大 纵轴——时间轴 ) Therefore/thus/ as a result, it is reasonable for teenagers to have a break when they are graduated from high school. 2.因果法 一般结构为： 主题句——原因——例子——影响 耽误学习 对学习有影响 +学习在这个时期很重要 +忘记知识 +跟不上其他同学 The idea is commonly accepted that there are a great number of negative effects