【课件】高中英语读后续写讲评课件.pptVIP

读后续写 ——第一次月考作文讲评 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 About a mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond in a stand of oak trees. In summer, it would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（浮渣）with an unpleasant smell. We stayed away. When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.” The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “You’re lighter than I am.” Harry urged. “If the ice holds, we can slide carefully on it. It’ll be fun.” I wanted to please him, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond. However, In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack! The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like glass. Again and again, I tried. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. As my coat became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice. I looked at Harry on shore, who seemed rooted to the spot. “I can’t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath. Seeing him turned and ran from the pond, despair and scare beat me out of breath. After what seemed to be centuries of fruitless waiting, I was on the verge of breaking down. Step 1: Read for the general idea，and underline some key information help you understand can be used later 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 About a mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond in a stand of oak trees. In summer, it would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（浮渣）with an unpleasant smell. We stayed away. When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice co