初二一学年中考作文指导.pptxVIP

How can we write a good composition(作文)?How can we write a good composition? (Have a discussion!)第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点具体做法：用笔勾画 假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。??姓名王林性别男本人特点身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处“爱心”表现（见图片）加入目的 1.… 2. …1.要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：70左右。(南通市中考作文)第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。不要遗漏要点！具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点Write an Outline可以用英文或中文看表格姓名/性别{Introduction I want to join… 本人特点 看表格{看图Main body“爱心”表现加入目的 自拟易漏掉的要点！ConclusionI hope you will agree with me. Thinking:自荐信What will you write？王林Who are you in this letter?人称: I加入该俱乐部What’s your purpose ?时态：一般现在时为主作文批阅（按中考标准）Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. 扣分原因一词数不够！Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. Introduction扣分原因二遗漏要点！本人特点加入目的Write an Outline无法拿满分！I am a boy… {?Introduction I’d like to join… ?本人特点 ?{Main body“爱心”表现?加入目的?ConclusionI hope you will agree with me. Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin缺少“爱心”表现也缺少Conclusion少了两个重要部分！我的看图“爱心”表现(examples)help…with…?help classmates with lessonsPicture 1 ?I often help classmates with lessons.“爱心”表现(examples)看图help…cross…?help old people cross the roadPicture 2?I help old people cross the road on my way home.“爱