读后续写赏析（12）：The Water of Life.docVIP

读后续写赏析（12）：The Water of Life 收录于话题 \o 读后续写范文 #读后续写范文 Paragraph1： ?However, Billy walked right up to them. _____________________________?? paragraph 2: I witnessed the most beautiful heart working hard to save a life. ___________ ? ?However, Billy walked right up to them. Cautiously, he knelt down by the weak baby fawn, seemingly familiar with the two creatures. The fawn, suffering from dehydration and heat exhaustion lifted its head up with great efforts and eagerly lapped up the water cupped in my beautiful boy’s hands. The mother deer stood by as if in guard. Not until the fawn licked the last drip of water did Billy move a little bit. I contained myself not to make a slightest sound, for fear of scaring them.? ? ? ? ?I witnessed the most beautiful heart working hard to save a life. With the water gone, Billy jumped to his feet and met my smiling eyes. Before he tried to explain, I strode to him and held him tight. As the tears that rolled down my face began to hit the ground, they were suddenly joined by other drops and more drops and more. I looked up at the sky. It was as if God, Himself, was weeping with pride. The rain that came that day was a miracle, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.? 译文 ? ? ? ?然而，比利径直走向他们。他小心翼翼地跪在虚弱的小鹿身边，似乎对这两种生物很熟悉。脱水和中暑的小鹿拼命地抬起头来，急切地把捧在我漂亮男孩手中的水一饮而尽。母鹿站在一旁，仿佛在守卫。直到小鹿舔过最后一滴水，比利才动了动。我克制自己不发出丝毫声音，生怕吓到他们。 ? ? ? ? 我见证了最美丽的心为挽救生命而努力。随着水的流逝，比利跳起来，对上我微笑的眼睛。在他试图解释之前，我大步走向他并紧紧抱住他。当从我脸上滚下来的泪水开始滴落到地面上时，突然之间又夹杂着其他的水滴，越来越多的水滴，越来越多。我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝，他自己，骄傲地哭泣。那天下的雨是个奇迹，拯救了我们的农场，就像我的孩子救了一条命一样。 ? ? However, Billy walked right up to them. Carefully, he reached out his tiny cupped hands, his shining eyes expectantly looking at the fawn. Instinctively, the fawn approached, stuck out his tongue and eagerly sucked every drop of water. Thirst satisfied, the fawn looked up at little Billy, licking his moistured lips, as if a sign of gratitude. The mother deer, who had all the time been around, breathed a sigh of relief though she herself was so