层级3 第1讲 添加合理的细节-高考英语一轮复习【名师导航】配套Word教参(外研版·老教材老高考).pdfVIP

第1讲 添加合理的细节 根据括号内的提示完成下列句子。 1 However,it seemsthatpeople arenot aware ofthenegative effectsofmobile ． phones on communication between people. For example, more and more people are notpaying attention to face­to­face communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面 对面的交流)． 2 At that moment,Ibecamethe focus ofthewhole classand Iwas full ofgreat ． prideandconfidence(我充满了自豪和自信)． 3 I suggest that the teacher select proper English films for us, thus making ． English learningmoreinteresting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)． 4．Ifpossible(如果可能的话),Illtakepart in some social activitiessothat I can knowmoreabouttodays society(以便我能更多地了解当今社会 ．) 5 I also helped children in theneighborhood with their English lessons.Tomy ． joy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthought highly ofme(令我高兴的是， 他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高 ．) 6．Lets develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make morecontributionstotheprotection oftheenvironment(尽力为环境保护做出更多贡 献 ．) 在高考试题的书面表达的 “注意”中明确要求：可以适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯。适当添加细节的方法具体如下： 1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 Ill spend sometimestayingwithmyparents. →Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them besides doingsomehousework. ②我看到了一些不良行为。 I found somebadbehaviour. →I found some bad behaviour. Some people scribbled on the wall; some playedonthelawn andsomethrew rubbish everywhere. ③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。 Iam ahealthyboy fullofenergy andIlike sportsvery much. →I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I havetime,Ill gohikingwithmy classmates. 2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 ①过去我有时去村西的小河里游泳。 Iwent swimmingintheriver tothewest ofthevillagenow andthen. →Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now andthen,inwhichthewaterwasvery clear. ②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。 After aweekstrip,hereturnedhome. →After aweekstrip,heretu