读后续写——如何合理构思续写情节 学案--高三英语写作专项.docxVIP

PAGE PAGE 1 读后续写——如何合理构思续写情节 读后续写通常是人物、主题、情节融合或交织在一起的叙事性文体。情节是按照因果逻辑组织起来的一系列事件，作者往往通过情节来展现人物性格、表现中心。因此，续写中情节的设计要关照人物形象的刻画和主题的凸显。没有好的故事情节和语篇框架，有再多的好词好句也是枉然，也只是词语堆砌。续写中应把情节内容和语言形式合二为一，形成合力。但是，值得注意的是高考续写中的情节设计又不能信马由缰天马行空，不能脱离题目给定的前文和两段首句。我们必须依据情节发展和常识，在给定的框架内，可按“所见、所闻、所想、所做、所感”等给每段写5至8个句子。例如： The story of my new family member We found a lonely dog a few weeks ago, walking along the road in the countryside. All of a sudden, he was jumping on cars, and at the same time we thought maybe his family was camping somewhere in the neighboring areas. As a consequence we passed him by without hesitation. A few hours later, on our return trip, he was still in the same place.again and again, making an attempt to get people to stop for him. When he caught sight of us approaching, he lay down in the middle of the road, so we failed to get around him. My father braked hard, pulled up and looked around for a few minutes, trying to figure out whether anyone around from whom he had been separated. After getting off the car, we checked the dog carefully. It didnt appear so.Then we took a good look at the poor but cute dog. He gazed at us eagerly with gloomy eyes. We circled around him in a total silence. We had an overwhelming desire to find out what was wrong with him. Unfortunately, we couldnt find any clues. He had no collar and he was really too thin. Eventually we decided that he had been abandoned. We showed great sympathy for the poor dog. How helpless he was on such an occasion! He was homeless and he had no one to rely on. On seeing the scene, we couldnt help begging my parents to raise him.My mother agreed excitedly, I love this lovely dog. How poor he is! It is high time that we should bring him home. She stared at the dog with tears welling up in her eyes. We knew my mother was willing to adopt the dog because she was so sweet and she loved dogs very much.My father thought it was dangerous to raise a dog due to the fact that we were too young. 注意∶ l.续写词数应为?150左右; 2.请按